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This is the start of our Ambition murder mystery series at zapdramatic.com.
oney brought me
The concept still stands well together, but this one was lousily put together compared to the other ones. The art I felt was a little sloppy, and the choices were pretty much, submit to her bs, or get shot. The other games had a bit more paths.
These are decent
So these are pretty decent you have some nice game ideas here with this one I like your idea here of this one some nice element about it you have a fun game idea here and you present some nice ideas here on this one, I still think some added interactivity would be a plus.
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Some added interactivity
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This is episode 5 or something. Boy had I to look up the entire internet to view/play the full series... Couldn't find the ending episode free anywhere.
Too short to be that impressive. Build on it and you have yourself something better.
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