Not bad
The story line is put together pretty well and the investigation is tricky but satisfying to finish. The only real problem I notice is the constant spelling and grammatical errors. For instance, "Jose" is pronounced ho-SAY, not Josie. And you take a break, not a brake (unless you're stripping a car, that is). The game itself is well made, but I would do good to do a spell check before you release it.
